I love Moribito: Guardian of the Spirit to pieces. It’s a type of anime I wish was more prevalent — a strong story-driven piece with a mature main character, a production that can call to a broader audience. There is something appealing about that. While I do admire the tone and animation of Moribito, I’m not so taken in by those charms to avoid feeling some mild disappointment when thinking about it as a whole.
For the good of his people, the Mikado of the New Yogo Empire has ordered the death of his youngest son, Chagum, who bears an egg inside him that when it hatches will bring upon a drought that will devastate the land. A fatal accident was arranged to occur over a bridge, but this was thwarted when a female spear for hire, Balsa, witnesses this “accident” and dives into the river to save the prince from drowning. Later that night she is summoned by the queen, who begs Balsa to protect her son from death to which Balsa agrees even though the task basically meant she would now be raising a child. Balsa has her own reasons, atonement for the lives she’s taken. So, in the dead of night, she and the prince escape and they begin their journey.
In a discussion provided on the dvds, director Kenji Kamiyama says the adaptation of the novel could be told in 13 to 15 episodes. However, it seems Moribito was slated for 26 episodes and rather than stretch the original story to fill 26 episodes, Kamiyama decided to leave the core story within those 15 episodes and add new material to get to 26 episodes. The structure sounds like a similar structure to what Kamiyama used in Ghost In The Shell: Stand Alone Complex (GitS) where there were “Stand Alone” episodes interspersed within the main story. The structure worked beautifully in GitS, but seemed less effective in Moribito. Moribito’s storyline is more straightforward than the one in GitS and gets derailed somewhat by the extra content. Much of the added material is actually great on its own, but when viewed as a whole it gets in the way of the core story. In part due to how long it feels like before returning to the story at some points. This forces an adjustment of expectations from what starts off as a tight adventure story to something much slower and meandering, before returning back to the tension of the main story.
Moribito also misplaces the visual highlight of the series in the beginning. The spear fight in the rice fields is a well choreographed fight which the climactic battle doesn’t come close to reaching. I can and have watched that rice field combat over a dozen times. There is also a duel, which has a great moment for Balsa that punctuates the difficulty of her personal oath and how it reveals the depth of her care for Chagum. Both of these climaxes are better than the third and final conflict. It’s more of an execution flaw than one of design or intent. The swarms of critters should have been tense and claustrophobic, just it wound up feeling like a bunch of people with pointed sticks standing around and poking at moving blobs.
The denouement was satisfying and it’s here where the slow segment of the show pays off. It’s not a shocking or surprising way to end. Thinking about it, the ending is the most obvious and natural one given the circumstances and the stations of those involved, but that’s pretty much how most of the show evolved. Moribito is thoughtful, grounded, and beautiful to watch.
Ultimately, I was hoping it would be something I could lend to friends who occasionally borrow anime like Berserk, Samurai Champloo, and Ghibli stuff. It’s not any show’s responsibility to become prime lending material, but I can see the decompressed plotting issues being a problem for strangers of anime to get over. Moribito just wasn’t good enough for that purpose, in spite of being very well done and well worth watching. Who probably enjoys this most are the initiated who need a break from sight gags, panties, and teenage angst.
Moribito’s Dub
Kristi Reed directed the English dub. As a BangZoom! dub production, the dub is conservative in its approach to localization, creating a functional English language version. Cindy Robinson voices Balsa, which tonally is a good representation of Balsa and the performance was good. Chagum is voiced by Mona Marshall who I’m kind of tired of hearing through no fault of her own. She always plays these young boy characters and I think she’s run out of ways to make them all distinct on the performance level. But whatever, she can do these roles in her sleep and she does the job well whenever she’s called to play these parts. I imagine she doesn’t even need a director as she can just walk in, think to herself, “I’ve played this character 133 times,” deliver her lines and leave. The tone between Balsa and Chagum is quite good.
I wasn’t much a fan of the English version of Madam Torogai. As a character, she’s nutty and way out there and Barbara Goodson takes her there. On the one hand, she breaks up the often dialed back dialog, but on the other it calls a lot of attention to itself as being somewhat out of step with everyone else. I think in English we have less tolerance for overdoing it than other languages. The rest of the cast delivers a decent approximation of their characters, though nobody feels solid and dead on.

This series is currently on my to watch list but now I have read your praises of it, it may get bumped up a few places!! ^^
It’s well worth watching. Hope you enjoy it.
I don’t mean to sound rude, but I think you completely missed the point of the “Stand Alone” episodes. Whereas in something like GitS SAC which is not at all character driven, SA episodes build the setting and provide entertaining material. In Moribito though which is very character driven, contrary to your conclusion, SA episode are much more important and work much better than in GitS SAC as they fill the same roles as GitS SAC’s SA episodes, but in addition vitally build each character and show their evolutions as individuals and as a family. I really think you should watch it again and try to notice how barren and hollow the show would be with SA episodes not present.
Perhaps I wasn’t clear, but I thought the filler material in Moribito was well done and paid off in the end in the denouement of the show and the general viewing experience. The problems with the filler was how they were clumped together, which interrupted the general clear flow of Moribito’s story, which hurt the momentum. I think these building moments could have been better distributed so as not to hurt the flow of the fairly straightforward story.
It worked better for me in GitS SAC because there was a better distribution and while viewing that show it was harder to say where the next step in the story would go, so an interruption to the main story didn’t bother me like it did in Moribito.
I purchased the full series box set when it came out and watched it within a week. Honestly, I was not very pleased with the story up until the final 5 or 6 episodes. At that point I actually began to care about the characters and what happened to them. Up until that point I was just watching to get my moneys worth.
The duel at the beginning you referenced to threw me off for most of the series. Instead of concentrating on the story I was just waiting for the next big fight. The last fight in my opinion could have done better like you mentioned. It did not feel quite so epic compared to the first fight.
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In the end did you find it worth watching once you finished it?
I love Moribito too. Sure, it had some pacing problems but the end result was still amazing. Balsa is one of my all-time favorite anime characters. She just kicks ass
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Balsa does rule. She made me want to mimic her fighting style with a D&D character, which I was able to do and kick major butt in the process.
After reading your post I’ve put this show on my “plan to watch list”.
Yesterday I finally found the time to watch a few episodes.
the animation quality impressed me a lot, the level of detail in the surroundings as well as the movement of the characters looks great.
After I only watched 4 episodes its a bit early to judge the show,
but so far I liked what I saw.
thanks you for yor recommendation
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The animation on it is sick for a TV show. I do hope you enjoy it, which I think if you already know beforehand that it isn’t action packed it might help since you’re not wondering when the next fight will happen. At least, I hope so.
yesterday I’ve finished this nice show.
well, the first action sequence gave out the impression that there would be more
intense fights but since action isn’t my favorite genre anyway it was no real problem for me.
I liked the way this story that had been told,
the big points of this show is the atmosphere and the environment
one minor flaw for me was that the relationship between Chagum and Balsa appeared a bit cold sometimes during the show.
it was still a great fantasy anime.
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I love watching Moribito. I would say a thumps up for this anime !!!!